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Amazon Chaos Vol.1- Chapter 1: Intro 2 Our Heroes( & later villain)

  • Amazon Chaos Vol.1- Chapter 2: Trouble Brews
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Amazon Chaos Vol.1- Chapter 2: Trouble Brews

Submitted by eXXXtasy69 on June 6, 2008 - 10:14am.
  • novel
  • no sexual content

Chapter 2
The hours went by & it finally became nightime. & u know how Vegas got @ nite. Well the first thing the three girls did was go 2 the casino. They didn't have much luck nor fun as they constantly were losing money & fast.

"Fuck dis shyt!!" Trisha said after she lost again @ blackjack.
"U r a fuckin' cheater!!"

The dealer just smirked. "Ma'am it is not my fault u dont know how to play cards. But thanks for the contribution anyway."

Trisha gave him a mean look then stormed off 2 find Kristin & Diamond. Both of them were @ the slots & weren't having no luck either.

"Dammit! These machines are rigged." Kristin said.

"Welcome 2 Vegas, hon." Diamond said as she saw her slot miss by 1 again.

"C'mon Diamond. If we stay here any longer we wont be able 2 even order fast food."

Just as they got up, Trisha met up with them.

"Damn, hon. U look quite pissed."

"Let's just go rite now b4 i hurt sum1. Takin' my money tryna put me n da po' house."

"Y dont we head out 4 drinks?" Kristin suggested.

"That sounds good. At least while we still have sum moolah."

"Oh hey Diamond. Peep 2 yo left girl."

"Y?"

"Romeo over there is lookin' 4 u girl. U better go. He looks fine 2"

"Yeah Di. He got a nice body 2. Go before I have a few words for him."

Diamond saw him over @ the bar givin' her sum interested looks. He had slick black hair he wore 2 the back. & had a build like a football player. Diamond did find him attractive so she strolled over near him.

"Hola senorita. Como estas?"

"Muy bien. Yo hablo ingles?"

"Yeah. Just wanted 2 c if u had it n u. U look Cuban 2."

"Yeah cuz my mom was. My dad was white."

"Looks good 4 u anyway. I'm Julio by the way. Julio Alvarez."

"I'm Diamond Pierce. Nice to meet you."

"You 2. So waht brings you fine women here n Vegas. U kno' they only want your money here."

"Yeah i found that out the hard way. But me & my friends are here on vacation from college. Had 2 get a break from the books u know?!

"It can be tough. Luckily for me I work here in the casino."

"Oh... that's nice. I c it now as this is a nice suit."

He grins then sees Diamond's friends watching nearby anxiously.

"So Diamond... I'm busy 2nite but do you have any plans tomorrow?"

"Nope. I'm free as a bird & I can be all yours." she said seductively.

"Muy caliente.. here's my number. Just call me tomorrow @ 8:00. I'll show you around & show you a good time mami."

"I like the sound of that, papi."

"Hasta luego."

"Adios."

He walked off & Diamond went back 2 her friends who looked like they were bout 2 piss themselves of excitement.

"So what did he say?!!"

"He told u sum sexy shyt n Spanish didn't he?! WEll?!"
"Yeah.. well?!"

She showed them his card & they both screamed excitedly!! A few people started 2 look at them like they were crazy.

"You lucky bitch!! I wanted a man like that. Dressed up. Sexy. I know he has money."

"Dem chicos'll take care of u tho' ,girl. Better than most fools i went out wit."

"Let's celebrate. U kno' we gotta get drinks..." Kristin said.

"You guys are nice. Crazy but nice."

"Di!!! U kno' we got u girl. Now let's go celebrate."

They went out of the casino & made 2 go 2 the bar. Which was only a few blocks away/ The streets were lit up wit lights & cars as people were havin' a good time in the nightlife. Just as the trio turned a corner... they saw two bums tryin' 2 beat down on sum1.

"It looks like she need help!!" Diamond said but Trisha held her back.

"Girl dem mothafuckas could have knives on dem Dey try 2 rape u then next thing u kno' u got aids. It aint our fight!! Let's jus' go."

"@ least call the police or sum'n" Kristin suggested.

"Like dey gon' do sum'n... by the time dey cum she'd b dead."

"I cant let dat happen!!" Diamond said.

She made 2 fight but then there was a bright light from where the bums were on top of the lady. The trio looked @ it n awe then all of a sudden the bums went flying 10 feet in the air 2 the other side of the street. Going unconscience once they hit the wall.

"Holy Shyt!! Did u c dat shyt!!"

"How the hell did she do that?"

Diamond went over 2 her side. She helped her up & saw the lady looked homeless as well. In fact she looked like she was in her mid-60's. Worn down lookin 2 from livin' on the harsh , cold streets. She had a grey scraf over her head & worn down clothes.

"Miss, are you okay. You need the medics 2 cum help you out?" Kristin asked.

"No my dear. I'm fine but thank you all though. I know I may not look like much but I can take care of myself."

She slowly got up but once she did she got a good look @ dem & gasped.

"Oh my goodness. It's you!! You three!! The trio of young, brave girls who will save us."

"Wat da hell r u talkin' 'bout. Let's go yall. I think dem drugs startin' 2 get 2 her." Trisha said.

"NO!! WAIT!! u must know the truth 4 it is your destiny. It is your purpose."

Kristin raised a confused eyebrow, Trisha looked pissed, while Diamond stood there cautiously.

"What is?" Diamond asked.

"You three are heroes. You three are the chosen ones from Lord Azalea herself. Here take this..."

The woman then got out a gold medallion and put it in Diamond's hands. Diamond looked @ it & saw it had a tall woman crested on it with what looked like the sun 2 be behind her.

"What is this?" She asked confused.

"It is your seal. Your way of--" but before she could finsih, Trisha shoved her away & snatched the medallion from Diamond.

"Wait!! Trish!!"

Trish then hurled it out @ the street. IT hit a curb but seemed to bounce back towards them & hit Trisha in her forehead. It then was back in Diamond's hands.

"AWWW!!! SHYT!!!"

Kristin tried 2 help calm her down while Diamond went closer 2 the woman. Wanting 2 know more about what she was talking about from what she just saw the medallion do on its own.

"So why do we need this?"

"It is where you will draw your power from. It is what will make you strong enough 2 face the evil that has come amongst us."

"Evil?!! What evil?" Kristin asked.

"She is not of this world. But she is here now & plans 2 takeover. All she has 2 do is consume life energy & she will get stronger. Much stronger. So strong that she will be a threat worldwide in a matter of days if she gets the chance. You three are who will stop her."

She then got out 2 more medallions & handed them 2 Trisha & Kristin.

"What good will these do us against her though?" K asked.

"They are where you will draw your power from. Your chi'..."

"Chi'? Wat da fuck iz dat?!"

"Chi' iz an internal power within you. You all have it 4 that's how I knew you were the 1's. You just have 2 focus on drawing power from within 2 get stronger. Strong enough 2 defeat her."

"What if this chi' doesn't work?!" Di asked.

"You just have 2 focus in hard on it. The medallion will absorb it then unleash it 2 you. Revealing the true women you all really are."

"U aint makin' no sense @ all."

The woman sighed then started 2 walk away.

"Wait!! You still have 2 tell us more." Di yelled.

"You three will get it soon. Especially when the time comes 4 i have faith in you all. Just remember.. there is more 2 you than what you see now. You just have 2 know how to summon it 4 it is your fate. The fate of this world from a growing threat."

And with that the weird lady vanished into thin air. Leaving the trio dumbstrucked & highly confused. They just stood there for a few seconds in silence. Staring @ their medallions. Kristin finally broke the quiet...

"Okay, either I'm drunk already or I aint enough yet so--"

"Let's get da fuck y'all. @ least we got sum bling tho'!! Dis'll rock wit my other outfit no doubt. But I aint ever gettin' no mo' bling from junkies ever again." Trisha said.

Diamond was still silent. She followed her friends as they walked 2 the bar but she kept staring @ her medallion. Just wondering about what that weird lady said about how they could use it.

'& what growin' threat was she mentionin?' she thought as she walked on as well...

Meanwhile, @ a gym further near the outskirts of town, four muscle guys had just arrived to do workouts. They were big fellas 2 with their hard earned muscles bulging. They began 2 get on different equipment on different areas in the huge gym. All of them pump heavy amounts on the bench press, leg press, free weights, & even crunches. After about half an hour, they decided to take a break.

Man 1: "Yeah boys. This is what a muscle looks like."

He flexed his arm & a big 21'' biceps came up with thick veins running thru it.

Man 2: Not bad but I aint 2 bad myself.

They all began posing in the mirrors. Watching their muscles bulges and pump up from their hard workouts so far. Just as they continued on the gym door opens and in come a radiant orange skinned woman. She looks around and grins when she sees the men flexing and posing. One of them turns around and spots her and grins.

Man 4: Hey boys look what we got here. You lookin' 4 a good time baby?!"

Man 3: Yeah. U like what you c!! Our bodies big & hard. Yet it looks like u can take a ride or 2.

They all laughed and continued flexing. One of them got closer 2 her. HE continued flexing as he was nearer 2 her. She just stood there watching him hungrily.

Man 2: So what'll b, huh? Private sessions or will you do us all here rite now.

They all laughed. He looked down at her but she just stood there.

Man 2: Hey bitch!! U stupid or sum'n!! I asked u a question!! Hello?!! Anyone home. U ugly lookin' freak!!

She still stood there. The other 3 laughed again.

Man 1: She wants 2 play hard 2 get.

Man 2: I dont got time 4 dat shyt!! i want pussy & i want it now!! GET ON DA FLOOR BITCH!!!

He punched her dead in the face. Any other woman or even some men woulda dropped but she was still standin' unfazed. All of them stared in awe as she just ate that hit.

Man 2: U tryna make a fool of me u got another thang comni' BITCH!!

He didn't want 2 b humiliated as a weakling. Rite in front of his friends 2 so he made 2 hit her again but dis time she caught his fist. All of them were shocked but the man felt a firm grip from her even though he was twice his size. He tired 2 swing again wit his free hand but she caught dat 2. She gripped harder on both his hands & a loud CRACK!!! was heard. He yelled & was on his knees. His body trembling as she somehow overpowered him. She then grabbed him from the neck & lifted him up above her. The men watched in awe as she held him up w/out any looks of fatigue watsoever. She then hurled him @ the full length mirrors nearby & he flew into them like a baseball pitch. Shattering the glass & getting badly bruised as well.

Man 3: Oh hell naw!! Let's fuck dis bitch up!!

Man 1: U done fucked up now HO!!

The three large men charged at her but she just stood her ground till dey were upon her. She hit one hard in his adam's apple where his whole body froze and he fell hard 2 the ground. She hit anohter in his nose wit an uppercut & he went flying into the ceiling first then came back down & crashed into a weight rack which buckled under him from his fall. The other she grabbed by the nuts and he was instantly immobile. She glared @ him wit those blank white eyes. Showing no emotion @ all. He on the other hand was sweating hard & breathing fast. His muscles fully pumped & defined but unable 2 help him as she had him by his most weakest point.

Man 3: P-p-pl-please... d-dont... k-k-kill... m-m-me...

She just stood there holding his balls. Then she started 2 squeeze tighter. He yelled as it felt like pliers piercing his testicles. Then all of a sudden he felt his muscles start to shrink. He looked in horror as his huge arms were slowly delfating. More veins started to show but his muscles continued 2 fade. His wide torso got thinner & smaller. His tank top was looking looser on him by the second. He could feel more air in his shorts as his leg muscles were getting thinner & thinner. His shoes soon felt 2 big on his feet as he felt the life getting sucked out of him. One of the other men slowly looked up & saw dis horrible thing taking place. The woman moaned as she felt his strength flow into her. Her body got more toned but only a little bit. The man felt lighter & lighter in her hands. Soon he looked like a 7 year old boy & was soon dead. She tossed him aside like he was trash & revelled in her power as she felt her body get stronger. She toned up some more wit even a few veins showing but she was only as toned as a fitness competitor.

Man 4: U... u... u... s-sick... b-b-bitch!!
Blood spat out is mouth. She strolled over 2 him & touched him on his cut back from the glass. He felt weaker and his body getting drained. He yelled but no1 could hear him. He was all hers now and he could do nothing as he felt himself dying slowly. He saw his muscles decrease & closed his eyes as he couldn't bear it no longer.

Man 4: NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!

2 b continued....

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Suggestion

Submitted by AbyssPlanet on June 7, 2008 - 7:02am.

I think your story would be a lot better if it wasn't littered with "internet speak". You know, abbreviated words, numbers as words, symbols in place of words.
You know, like, proper grammar and things like that.

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Good plot and actions

Submitted by Keith123 on August 7, 2008 - 7:46pm.

Good plot. It is okay/good to use dialect in quotations, where the characters are speaking.

But the rest of it should be written out. If you can, it would be worthwhile to come back and fix up the first 2 chapters, because readers have to like them before they'll even know what is in the rest of the book.

It would be worth it.

The plot is good. And I really like the descriptions and action.

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